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Within a Soul

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Version 1.

A drumming, slow and purposeful.
Blue breath begets inane ramblings of death and cats and distant worlds.
Dreaming of dreams filled with imagination and heroes, indigo suns illuminating realization.
A life awakens to a golden crescent.
Drums evolve into monarchs, born anew with a desire for knowledge;
A destiny of euphoric recognition.
Heir of Breath.

Version 2.

A drumming, slow and purposeful.
His footsteps, quiet and light.
Blue breath begets inane ramblings of death and cats and distant worlds.
Dreaming of dreams filled with imagination and heroes, indigo suns illuminating realization.
He wanted to discover himself.
A life awakens to a golden crescent.
His cerulean eyes of the ocean widened.
Drums evolve into monarchs, born anew with a desire for knowledge;
A destiny of euphoric recognition.
Heir of Breath.
Just a little something I whipped up during study hall c:
There are two versions, the second having italicized inserts from my friend.
I'd love to know which is better c:
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WingsOfStarlight's avatar
woOWOWOW i didn't know you put this up xD.